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September 23, 2009

the replaced: maximization of the griefing.

here i am again.
alone.
very vulnerable.
suffering because of the replaced.
i have been replaced.
i have been torn apart.
this time too many.
one snap.
its all gone.
i am chasing something that is impossible to be chased.
because i have been replaced.
hush now.
tomorrow will be another day.
but don't be too optimistic.
everything is possible.
the sun might be overpowered by the heavy rainfall.
that can't be changed.
and yes, i have been replaced.
defining loneliness to the extreme.
sleepless nights.
endless suicidal attempts.
maximization of the griefing.
i am never shock-proof.
the stentorian laments are skyrocketing.
stucked.
trapped.
lost.
forgotten.
i have been replaced.

2 comments:

gentle said...

i can feel your grief. nice poem! :)

carloslaron said...

pare, this poem rocks my socks. seriously I can relate. nice one man! btw, your entries are awesome. if you got time check out mine :) waha.